My bag
This is my bag.
It's red_ white and black, It's too big far me. But it is very light .It has got a toy on it, yellow baby,It's cute., It's Haimian baobao. I like it, It's got four poackets, I can putmy book there, It'll be easy for me to carry. I like my bag veny much.
就这么一篇小文章,写的挺不错的,设计的非常漂亮,但是就是因为中间的海绵宝宝费了一节课的时间,还弄出来个汉语拼音,说什么也不听,出来错误不还得扣分吗?就是不听不听非要用这个海绵宝宝.我说他像个犟驴,他说这是执拗执拗,你懂吗?
